I have a classmate. Her name is Khaerani Safitri. Her hobby is cooking. She can cook well. She can cook because her mother is an expert in cooking. She likes to make cake the most, but she also can cook main course. She usually cooks for her brothers and sister when her parents are not home. Her cooking is so delicious. She also likes to cook in her leisure time. She can make every food ingredients to be something that we can eat. You do not have to worry about the taste. It is good. In her opinion, the hardest food to make is rendang because she often fails to make it. The most surprising thing is she makes a birthday cake for her friend by herself. Cooking is more than a hobby for her. It is an addiction.
Topic : Her hobby
Controlling idea : cooking
Yummy....
BalasHapusOne day, I will ask Khaerani to cook for me.
The word 'to make' in the sentence: "the hardest food to make...." is must be with a word 'be' (to be make), isn't it?
heeem... my dear is a good cooker.. love it..
BalasHapusmy birthday is getting closer, ail wait a birthday cake she makes by her self.. :D
@nabil : i guess that words already in a right structure..
hohoho...
BalasHapusMy comment 'to be make' I mean 'to be made' (because, it's a passive)
But, I don't think so that my comment is right.
Because, I think if there is no word 'be' in that sentence, it can be a passive too. :)
lets ask khaerani cook for us :D
BalasHapusthank you nabil,thank you hika....
Yeah, I start becoming hungry:-) Nice and organized writing if only u also state the correct TS. Using 'her' in TS is not that appropriate as it's unclear subject. U can revise ur TS though. It's wonderful u already tried using different type of sentences, and more vocabs. Furthermore, ur writing is also free from mistake in grammar. Very good!
BalasHapus